What do you think of this small piece of literature i wrote?

I have tolerated your insolence for all the wretched years of my once joyful life. You have twisted my final nerve, and retrieved the essence of my soul, being the blood-sucking parasite that you are. You will find that revenge will follow you as a cat does a mouse. The structure of your existence will collapse under your shivering fear, and I'll look in pity but not sorrow, as I gaze apon your crumbling demise. And when you look back at the ruins THAT WAS ONCE YOU'RE LIFE....... You will remember that arrogance comes with an extravagant price....